What We Look for in a Manuscript

When people ask about publishing with Hayshack Press, the first question is usually about the process. The second, more revealing question — asked quietly, often at the end — is whether we actually think their book can succeed.

We answer that question honestly, because we think that is what authors actually need from a publisher. Not validation, not reassurance, but a clear-eyed view of what the book is, who it is for, and what it will take to reach those readers.

Independent publishing has changed dramatically. The barrier to getting a book into the world is lower than it has ever been. But the barrier to getting a book read has never been higher. More books are published every year than any reader could get through in a lifetime. Visibility is the hard problem, not production.

What we look for in a manuscript

We are not looking for perfection. We are looking for a story or an argument that is genuinely worth the reader’s time — something that would hold up alongside the best work in its genre. We look for a clear sense of who the reader is, because that shapes every decision that follows: cover design, pricing, where and how the book gets promoted.

We also look for authors who understand that publishing a book is the beginning of a relationship with readers, not the end of a writing project. The books we have seen succeed are the ones where the author stayed curious about their audience.

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Why the opening pages matter most

In publishing, the first five pages decide almost everything. Editors, agents, and even readers on Amazon make their judgment fast. A manuscript that opens with a slow setup, excessive backstory, or a generic scene will lose its chance before the good part arrives. We read the opening pages first, and we are honest about what we find. A strong opening does not need to be flashy. It needs to establish who the story is about, what is at stake, and why the reader should keep turning pages. If the opening works, we read the rest. If it does not, no amount of strong material later in the manuscript changes that first impression.

For nonfiction manuscripts, the same principle applies in a different form. The introduction or first chapter needs to establish the problem the book addresses, why it matters, and what the reader will gain by continuing. A nonfiction manuscript that opens with a vague overview or a list of topics rather than a compelling argument will struggle to hold an editor’s attention. The best nonfiction openings make a promise to the reader and deliver on it within the first few pages.

Common manuscript problems we see

After reading hundreds of submissions, certain patterns emerge. The most common problem is not bad writing. It is a manuscript that has not been edited with a reader’s perspective in mind. The author knows the story so well that they skip over things a first-time reader needs explained. Characters are introduced without context. Plot points rely on information the reader was never given. The pacing drags in the middle because the author fell in love with a subplot that does not serve the main story.

The second most common problem is a manuscript that does not know its audience. A children’s book written in adult vocabulary. A business book that assumes the reader already has a decade of industry experience. A memoir that spends too much time on background the reader does not yet care about. Knowing who you are writing for is not optional. It shapes every decision from word choice to chapter length to cover design. If you cannot describe your target reader in one sentence, the manuscript probably needs more work before it is ready for submission.

The third problem is the missing edit. Many manuscripts we receive have never been through a substantive edit. They have been proofread — spelling and grammar checked — but the structural issues remain. A good edit looks at the manuscript as a whole. It asks whether each chapter earns its place, whether the argument or story builds logically, and whether the ending delivers on what the beginning promised. This is the difference between a manuscript that reads like a draft and one that reads like a book.

What we need from authors

We look for authors who understand that publishing is a partnership. The author brings the vision, the voice, and the expertise. We bring the production machinery, the distribution network, and the market knowledge. That only works when both sides are clear about what they are contributing. We need authors who are willing to take editorial feedback, who understand that a cover is a marketing tool not a personal art project, and who are prepared to be part of promoting their own book after publication.

The authors whose books succeed are the ones who stay engaged through the entire process. They answer questions promptly. They meet deadlines. They think about their readers before publication, not after. Publishing a book is not the finish line. It is the starting line for a relationship with an audience, and the author is the person best positioned to build that relationship.

If you are wondering whether traditional or independent publishing suits your manuscript better, our guide on what traditional publishers are looking for in 2026 covers the landscape honestly. And if you are still working on the manuscript itself, the step-by-step process in how to self-publish a book in South Africa walks through everything that comes after the writing is done.